Designs for Magazine Adverts

Here is some of the designs I have come up with for my magazine adverts:

Draft1:

Draft2:

Draft 3:

These are just drafts that I have created using Photoshop, at the moment me and Patsy are still gathering our ideas together.
Draft 4:
Here is another draft of our magazine advert:
http://patsykatejonesa2cwblog.blogspot.com/2011/12/magazine-advert-draft-1.html

Final Version of Magazine Advert(Draft 5):
http://patsykatejonesa2cwblog.blogspot.com/